This is interesting Susan, I like that the artist changed and developed the idea in partnership with the participants. I think the way the projects are represented is appropriate, but I would personally have liked more detail. Also thinking about the documentation method as art object might be an idea too.
I agree, I would have like to have included more detail without losing the appeal of the publication. Focusing and planning documentation might be a way to achieve this and I look forwrad to learning more about your approach as an artist through the project.